The way I look at it is, it isn’t jumping the shark — if you never come back down.

— “Carter Edlund” (Chuck Shirley)

So I am participating in this writing exercise at my blog hosting site along with about a million other people. (Feel free to peruse; there’s some neat stuff.) We’re writing in response to prompts, which really appeals to me because I use prompts all the time in my classes.  It’s the natural way to get students to write about philosophical and/or literary topics (“Short Answer” mode, perfect for biology, doesn’t quite cut it in theology.  Explain God. Use both sides of the paper if necessary.)  I tell them all the time, there’s no “wrong” way to answer a prompt, but of course in a college assignment that’s a lie; they can a) not respond to it at all; b) write about cheese; c) answer each teeny tiny portion of the prompt with “yes” and “no” (“Yes, I think that people can behave morally.  No, I do not think that morality has to come from a religion.  Religion is defined by the Merriam-Webster dictionary as…”  That’s definitely the wrong way to respond to a prompt.)  d) go on and on and on without a thesis.  I, of course, get to do that.  I write a blog.  Thesis is a dirty word.

But is it really digressing if there’s no point?

The thesis, after all, is a choice.  The prompt may be wide open, it may have infinite potential, but once an agent (me) commits to a point of view (I am writing on my blog, which has a finite potential audience) there’s thesis.  The important thing is to commit. Then, stick to it — the choice has been made.

So that little introduction is not truly a digression, merely part of a larger choice.  The other part is the prompt itself. We were told to respond (and encouraged to skip “thinking” and “logic” which is like skipping “breathing” and “having a pulse”) with “the three most important songs in your life.” Try as I might, I could not derive a thesis.  I cannot come up with a coherent whole, true synthesis, a thematic unity, if I think of three songs.  And we’re trying to talk about my WHOLE life here?  I’m older than most of you.  I know more songs. So instead of an impulsive response, which was what the prompt really wanted from me, I digressed.  In musical terms, I vamped.  One of the other no-rules rules was “Don’t cross out.”  I haven’t, honest.  But I digressed.

Three songs.  One doesn’t exist.  It’s called “Who Hit Nelly in the Belly with a Flounder.”  It’s a family inside joke, a muted reference, a hypothetical reality, and it makes me think of two important people who’ve died; how much it hurts that no one reading this can really understand; I could explain it, but it wouldn’t be the same, and anyway I’d be digressing.

(Clears lump in throat.)

The second song isn’t a song, it’s an album, which is appropriate for the album-rock 1970s child I am. It’s called A Day at the Races, and it came to live with me in a beautiful gatefold black cover in January of 1977 because I didn’t get it for Christmas (you want WHAT is it called now? OK, go buy it; I’ll never find it.)  Every note on it, every lyric printed inside the gatefold, every pixel of the blurrily indistinct photo, every Art-Deco line of the cover art, each and every credit, all the way down to the terse and final, “No synthesizers!” — all rushed their way into my consciousness and lived there, warm and loving, to emerge two years later (after some help from friends) in my novel/pretend real life.  Sheer bloody poetry.

Anybody who gets that reference gets an ice-cream.

The last one starts with three chords: A minor, E minor, A minor. After which, the most beautiful voice I’ll ever hear sings to the health of the whores of Amsterdam, in the port of Amsterdam. Pain, ferocity, triumph, magnificence, transcendence; a voice I’ll never hear again; a moment I still feel, a moment when my love was alive; alive in every sense of the word. I wish for my sake even more than yours that I had a YouTube link to the real moment, the real voice I’m talking about.  Cameras aren’t actually ubiquitous and not everything is on tape somewhere. 

So.  There is a thematic unity.  Love, loss, a desire for something sublime that existed for one moment only and passed away, ephemeral; or never existed at all; or existed but not for me, not in the way I’d have hoped because novels aren’t real life. How silly of me to think that I wouldn’t find synthesis.  Everything in life is the same; I’ve always known that.

 

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